I've gotten some great help from Scripting News readers in comments under my post about changes to the home page.
Now I've made changes to the phone version of story pages, and would like to find out how it works for you.
Here's a screen shot showing what a story page looks like in the phone version. Here's a link to the story, so you can see what it looks like on the device (or computer) you're reading it on now.
In the phone version, I changed the font size on the body text, and moved it down below the top portion of the page. Somehow it had ended up writing over it? Sorry about that.
I also made the dark background for the text a little taller, and constrained the text to fit within it. The text was also, in some circumstances, overwriting the right edge of the screen causing it to scroll. If it still does that, that's a problem, and please post a comment here, let me know how wide your display is, so I can see what's going wrong.
The obligatory "CSS sucks" disclaimer. It's the worst way to design the look of a page, but it's also the best one I know how to use. Someday I will do a story page rendering that uses flexboxes. But not today. :-)